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Oakgrove Cemetery, Tomah, WI.

06/16-20 of my Cemetery Photography Project

Critiques


:iconrobert-kim-karen:
I think that in your whole gallery, this may be your most outstanding piece. The impact for me is, that the very dark, looming, contrasted cross speaks of the impending and inevitable doom of death we all face. Inescapable. The bare branches of the trees also re-inforce this notion. But offsetting that, is the very bright glow of the sun in the sky, in heaven. One may choose a diety or state of existance for the afterlife, as suites personal belief, but this speaks clearly to me that "We all shine on".

Strictly speaking, the contrasts and levels are a bit overdone, but in this piece they fit quite nicely. I feel they help strengthen the contrast between death and life.

Your composition in this is excellent, and leaves me with nothing to say but the particular points I like about it. Those being; the glow of the sun is high and center, perhaps giving validation to the importance of life after death, over the eventuality of death. The cross imposes itself like a huge in-surmountable wall, a thing which must be dealt with, and the location fits nicely into the rule of thirds for composition. The braches along the side, as I mentioned before, re-inforce the notion of death, and add a clawing/reaching element as well. While nicely framing the border along that side and adding balance to the rest of the composition.

I find it impossible to give a strictly objective critique, and especially when dealing with death, all sorts of ideas creep in. ;)
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:icondyanarosejill:
This one is cool, I like the way the light is making the cross sort of glow.

--
I have not been called to the wisdom of this world
But to a God that's calling out to me
And even though the world may think I'm losing touch with reality
it would be crazy to choose this world over eternity
:iconkovitlac:
I was so happy when saw that ^^ It just sorta happened on its own while I was upping the contrast. It was cool :)

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"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day. All the world is waiting for the sun."
:iconawanderer01:
I like the glow and the composition.

The one branch coming down from above is slightly distracting but I guess you can't do anything about that :-)

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________________________
A Wanderer in the Darkness

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:iconkovitlac:
I actually sorta like the odd little branch. But to each his own^^ Thank you for the feedback!

--
"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day. All the world is waiting for the sun."
:iconknuddelkroete:
This is unbelievably good.

It reminds me a bit of Jesus. I know it's strange, but the cross with this light and the strong contrast... that's a bit like his resurrection which fits the graveyard.

I'm sorry for this when you're not really religious ^^;

--
Ich bin abhängig von der Droge namens StEx...........
und ich habe keine Chance, clean zu werden :D
:iconkovitlac:
No, I understand completely :) I'm Lutheran.

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.

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"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day. All the world is waiting for the sun."
:iconwoodyfan:
I totally agree with Knuddelkroete! She told me about this photo at school and had enthused about it only, so I had to take a look ;)
I really love this one. Although it's quite simple it so unbelievably beautiful

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Die Erinnerung ist das einzige Paradies, aus dem wir nicht vertrieben werden können.
:iconkovitlac:
Aww, thank you so much^^ I'm so deeply flattered! To be honest, this is one of my favorites, too :)

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"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day. All the world is waiting for the sun."
:iconwoodyfan:
You'r welcome ;)

--
Die Erinnerung ist das einzige Paradies, aus dem wir nicht vertrieben werden können.

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